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Anth 206 Feedback and Revision Form

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1. List feedback (positive, negative, suggestions) that you received from me, your classmates, or other sources like the writing center or even friends and family with whom you shared your paper.
2. Put an asterisk (*) next to the critiques or suggestions that you think are most important to work on for your final draft.
3. As you revise, you can also add comments about other changes that you decided to make on your own.

Use of Outside Sources (Literature Review)

The feedback received for this section was positive. The sources used were appropriate and supported the discussion effectively. No major revisions were required.

Interviews/Findings *

The feedback for this section was positive; however, it was suggested that this section should be expanded. Since it is the main focus of the paper, additional detail, examples, and explanation will be added to strengthen the analysis and provide more depth.

Thesis and Argument

The thesis and overall argument received positive feedback. It was considered clear and appropriate for the topic. Only minor refinements may be made to improve clarity.

Anthropological Concepts and Perspectives *

Although feedback for this section was generally positive, it was recommended to expand the discussion. More anthropological concepts and perspectives will be integrated to strengthen the academic depth of the paper.

Organization, Paragraph Structure, Transitions

This section received positive feedback. The structure and flow of ideas were clear, and no significant changes are required.

Writing Style, Tone, Word Choice, Clarity

The writing style was well received, with clear tone and appropriate word choice. No major adjustments are needed in this section.